RATA SEVENS

Benjamin, Kritafa, Leon, Evelyn, Kody, Cruz, Kobe, Teira, Saphire, Memphis, Ruthy, Dayton, Solya, Seila, Desmond, Austin, Mary-Jayne, Jor-El, Brett, Elijah, Faatoelau, Paris, Ala, Mrs Harrison, Whaea Tina, Whaea Sarah and Whaea Lisa

Wednesday 5 March 2014


CHARACTER DESCRIPTIONS:

Hes old and hes got a gigantic nose.  He's got a bald head.  He's  got   wrinkles.  His hair is sticking up and he has bags under his eyes.  His ears look very long.  He looks like he is going to give a sloppy kiss.  

By Desmond

The old man

 
His eyes are big and round, wide too and his face has a lot of rolling wrinkles that look like sand waves at the beach. He has hair as white as paper. He has ears as big as a 30 cm ruler.  I can see that his lips are very dry lips. You can hardly see his eyebrows.  His neck is very sucked in.

By Evelyn

The ugly man                     His wrinkles are like rolled sand. His hair is pointy like grass. His nose is like a baboons butt. His ears are like monkeys.  His waved chin is like a skate park. He has big, goggle, poppy eyes. He is going to kiss me. He wears a jacket ripped open, cruddy shirt. His bald head is like the top of a mountain. He lives in a hovel.  He smells like poo because he did not have a shower for 10000000 years. He looks like smiggles.  He has 0 teeth, he is going to die. .  He has 0 teeth he is going to die.
.             by Leon





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