RATA SEVENS

Benjamin, Kritafa, Leon, Evelyn, Kody, Cruz, Kobe, Teira, Saphire, Memphis, Ruthy, Dayton, Solya, Seila, Desmond, Austin, Mary-Jayne, Jor-El, Brett, Elijah, Faatoelau, Paris, Ala, Mrs Harrison, Whaea Tina, Whaea Sarah and Whaea Lisa

Wednesday, 5 March 2014


CHARACTER DESCRIPTIONS:

Hes old and hes got a gigantic nose.  He's got a bald head.  He's  got   wrinkles.  His hair is sticking up and he has bags under his eyes.  His ears look very long.  He looks like he is going to give a sloppy kiss.  

By Desmond

The old man

 
His eyes are big and round, wide too and his face has a lot of rolling wrinkles that look like sand waves at the beach. He has hair as white as paper. He has ears as big as a 30 cm ruler.  I can see that his lips are very dry lips. You can hardly see his eyebrows.  His neck is very sucked in.

By Evelyn

The ugly man                     His wrinkles are like rolled sand. His hair is pointy like grass. His nose is like a baboons butt. His ears are like monkeys.  His waved chin is like a skate park. He has big, goggle, poppy eyes. He is going to kiss me. He wears a jacket ripped open, cruddy shirt. His bald head is like the top of a mountain. He lives in a hovel.  He smells like poo because he did not have a shower for 10000000 years. He looks like smiggles.  He has 0 teeth, he is going to die. .  He has 0 teeth he is going to die.
.             by Leon





Sunday, 2 March 2014

ROOM SEVENS SWIMMING STAR
Dayton was so excited that he did it.
LEARNING HOW TO DO FREESTYLE
USING THE FLUTTER BOARDS

The crazy swimmers of room 7




 


When it was the third rows turn to get our sticks. I jumped in with a splash and the water went wavy so I started swimming as fast as I could but I couldn’t find mine.  I was confused so I swam to the other side, Leon there trying to find his, so I dived under and stole Leon’s one and swam to the teacher gave her the stick and I climbed out. Leon couldn’t find his because I stole it. He was diving under the water like a seal searching franticly until whaea Lisa told him,‘’ it’s over there ‘’ pointing to my one. So he swam there got it and swam to the teacher.  He gave the stick to her, climbed out and got dressed.

By Evelyn



When I jumped into the pool it was freezing cold. I had Goosebumps everywhere. It felt like I had been shot by an ice gun. When I was putting on the swimming cap it was tight and it almost squashed my head.  


 By Benjamin



 
I went swimming and I was good at it.  I was cold when I got in the pool.  I was freezing. I was shivering for a short time.
By Cruz

I fell into the pool it felt like I was on an iceberg.  It was like I was on a sea dive.  It was like I was stuck to ice. My mouth was rattling.  I was shacking out of control.
By Leon


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